http://trashcancrash.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] trashcancrash.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] soul_logs 2011-06-13 12:43 am (UTC)

oh god what are tenses /keeps switching between present and past

"... You sure? Your partner seemed pretty drained after using that ability of hers."

Eyeing the mess on the floor for a couple of seconds, Shizuo shrugged slightly, before leaning himself against the wall of the mall and sinking into a slouched seating position on the cleaner part of the floor. His cigarette holding hand propped idly against his knee; he tapped another stream of ash onto the floor.

"You guys hadn't fought together before, had you? You did pretty good."

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